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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Ninjac » 03 Dec 2010, 17:14

Solid updates Sweron. Your progressing well. I agree with previous comments about your last line art piece. Line variation takes lots of practice to master. My only other crit is that his hands seem a little small, particularly the pointed index finger on the right hand. Keep working hard you'll get there!

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Sweron » 09 Dec 2010, 11:11

dZ-ero wrote:Then I'm not surprised! Women loooove androgynous men. I know because I've drawn a lot for many, many girls. :17:

On a more serious note, though, Oren is right. Line variation makes for a more interesting piece but you there needs to be a clear structure. For instance, make the lines of the silhouette thicker than everything inside it.
You can also use lines to spotlight the focal points. For instance, in your image the lines of the jacket are way thicker than the rest, which consequently drew all my attention to it. Unless the jacket is the focal point (which I presume it isn't) this shouldn't be.

It really looks nice, though. You keep practicing and you'll have line art mastered in an instance. I would also suggest looking up some Japanese illustrators. The Japanese are second to none when it comes to line art.



Tnx for advice about lineart and japanese masters, and yes, she surely loves androgynous males :D

Nyra wrote:LoL really is awesome but it takes a lot of time to enjoy this game and that's the reason why I stopped painting it :D

Your new sketches looks great as always, keep it up
Cheers! :b3:


Thank you mate, ah well, i can't give up from LoL, it is so dear hobby to me now :D

Ninjac wrote:Solid updates Sweron. Your progressing well. I agree with previous comments about your last line art piece. Line variation takes lots of practice to master. My only other crit is that his hands seem a little small, particularly the pointed index finger on the right hand. Keep working hard you'll get there!


Thank you for your response, about size of hand.. i finished it and send it to friend before reading your comment :/ now.. i could change that to be more better but i tend to leave my pieces alone once I say they are finished. I will not forget, I dont forget any of comments and critics you guys give me. Tnx.

Here it is, colored, finished piece :)
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And some traditional Loomis head studies :) I did not draw much lately, but a little by little I'll progress.
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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Sweron » 12 Dec 2010, 14:26

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Sweron » 03 Jan 2011, 14:35

Usual update from me, and happy New Year to everyone ! :)

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby oren90 » 03 Jan 2011, 15:12

good looking sketches :) though the eyes could use some more work :)

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Meteorskies » 03 Jan 2011, 23:10

Getting better on the faces Sweron. I would suggest to try some old people portraits with references now, it helps a lot to understand the different volumes of the face.

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Nyra » 04 Jan 2011, 00:23

Happy new year sweron
and awesome job on those sketches. You're really getting better

Cheers!

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Sweron » 09 Jan 2011, 15:36

oren90 wrote:good looking sketches :) though the eyes could use some more work :)


indeed, sometimes i dont give em enough attention and they end up being too separated or some other errors occur.
Meteorskies wrote:Getting better on the faces Sweron. I would suggest to try some old people portraits with references now, it helps a lot to understand the different volumes of the face.

Yes, yes, coming to that, few more young females and then old people faces ( loomis book ) and then children. :)
Nyra wrote:Happy new year sweron
and awesome job on those sketches. You're really getting better

Cheers!


Same to you :) Thank you very much for your kind response.


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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Aureaus » 09 Jan 2011, 20:23

Nice work, love the colours. You are getting very good. I love the seagull :44:

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Re: Sweron's SB

Postby Meteorskies » 10 Jan 2011, 19:19

I should work Loomis stuff too

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