KITCHEN 4.1 we cook art here!

by **damouse** » 03 Feb 2011, 21:35

feel free to critque here, in fact please do. Just remember that they are quicks, warmups and wips, I'll take all crit into consideration although you may not necessarily see it reworked here.

alrighty, let's kick this thing off with one of these:

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by **damouse** » 03 Feb 2011, 21:37

there's a kitchenbot, look at that. Now my sketchbook has unnecessary spam in it. boo to that.

Let's toast to new rivalries.

i drink and post · by **Mugshotpro** » 03 Feb 2011, 23:10

I like the style, I'm partial to comicbook-like styles.
nice pose. Work on the man-ish hands, maybe do some hair studies. lookin' good though, Keep Sketchin' and postin'

everyone loves the kitchen BOT :22:

i drink and post · by **Meteorskies** » 04 Feb 2011, 12:13

Somehow she reminds me of Kira in Disney's Secret of the Atlantis

look at them jugs · by **JakeyChan** » 04 Feb 2011, 21:37

Yah Mets I think it's fanart from the movie. Very cool to see your own version/style. Hope to see more!

i drink and post · by **Meteorskies** » 04 Feb 2011, 22:14

Two things:
- her right hand bothers me a bit, I think it's because the fingers are too short and to large
- the perspective for the staff is too strong. It drives away the eye from her face which should be the focal point. Try to reduce the perspective a bit.

i has beer! · by **Spiderspy** » 05 Feb 2011, 00:13

The hand looks a bit odd and a bit dirty :24:

Also the the "bra"? to our left isnt filled, and looks odd.

by **damouse** » 05 Feb 2011, 03:10

Meteorskies wrote:Somehow she reminds me of Kira in Disney's Secret of the Atlantis

yeah it's kida. that's also why it looks like she has man hands, I was trying to bring some of the chunkiness from the style with it.

I'll admit I'm putting off painting it because that aspect is scaring me a bit defining that chunkiness in the form.

Meteorskies wrote:Two things:
- her right hand bothers me a bit, I think it's because the fingers are too short and to large
- the perspective for the staff is too strong. It drives away the eye from her face which should be the focal point. Try to reduce the perspective a bit.

ta for that, I really need that critical I eye. I knew the hand was all off, but I was totally looking past the staff.

Spiderspy wrote:
Also the the "bra"? to our left isnt filled, and looks odd.

yeah, on it, thanks

JakeyChan wrote: Very cool to see your own version/style. Hope to see more!

I thought the sketchbook would link in a bit more than it does, live and learn, here are some more initial intro sketches as a sort of intro, this is my brain:

and I swear I'll be getting some better quality up soon

by **damouse** » 06 Feb 2011, 03:38

this is for lunedar's study activity over [url=http://wecookart.com/forum/viewtopic.php?t=524] here{/url]

it took two and a bit hours and that texture was far trickier than I had anticipated.