KITCHEN 4.1 we cook art here!

by **operion** » 09 Sep 2012, 05:58

Hello, I am new here. I am french and I really want to improve my skills. Critics & feedbacks are welcome.
Hope you will like my work.
Here is where I am:

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A.I · by **KITCHEN BOT ::** » 09 Sep 2012, 05:58

Hello operion !
It is good to see you posting here!
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i drink and post · by **Meteorskies** » 09 Sep 2012, 22:37

Welcome welcome welcome! I'm glad we still have new artists opening sketchbooks in here.
Nice to meet a fellow French artist.
Your piece looks very good. While you are still working on it I would tone down the bright red a bit to avoid distracting the eye from the upper part of the body, which is the main focal point I suppose.

Keep the good work coming!

want more beer · by **Viall** » 10 Sep 2012, 22:14

very cool work :22:

. will you finish the rest of the picture or will you leave it like it is in your last composition? :evil:

i drink and post · by **Mugshotpro** » 10 Sep 2012, 22:51

epic art !!!

want more beer · by **A4eon** » 10 Sep 2012, 23:30

Amazing

I really liked the design

Next glass! · by **Deero80** » 11 Sep 2012, 08:20

Moar...moar...moaaaar!!! :09:

by **operion** » 12 Sep 2012, 19:02

Deero80 >

A4eon > Thank you.
Mugshotpro >

Viall > Thanks, I will finish, I can't let this unfinished. Not with time I spent drawing the thorns!! xD I think the background will be simple to bring out the details on the guy.
Meteorskies > He, nice to meet you french partner!

Thank you for the advice, I get it and I will work on the scythe.

Thank you very much! I apreciate the welcome! I have work to do so I could not go further that I wanted. So here 's anaother step.

want more beer · by **Izi Ningishzidda** » 12 Sep 2012, 22:33

Nice but why is he holding his scythe weapon behind him so awkwardly? Doesn't seem tactically sensible, and the perspective makes it looks like it should be lopping his leg off.

i drink and post · by **Meteorskies** » 12 Sep 2012, 23:27

For the pose, Naomi, foe the pose :32:

However I agree you could adjust the perspective of the scythe a tad, just to give a bit more depth. Keep the curving at the end to bring the eye back to the upper part of the body, but reduce the size of this part a bit (I'm not sure I'm clear). I love the new design of the scythe by the way, and you did great fixing the saturation.
Don't hesitate to drop by the irc channel, we usually give critics directly and there is always few people in there to help.

Keep it up, I'm looking forward to the end result.