Yell at me and see improvement! :D

[Forrest_I]

Thanks Mugshot I actually got a pretty ok critique on it so when I get the time I will fix that one up. I was lurking on ImagineFX's forums and saw they do challenges on there so I decided to join since I have time and I had an idea right away. But before I worked on that I did this self portrait I'm super proud of, but shouldn't be because I'm not the best! >.<

[Forrest_I]

WATCH ME BITCH!

[Forrest_I]

I have to make quite a few changes to the piece with the girl, the hand looks fucked up to me and it all feels a little too tight and tense, I want it to be more relaxed. Also, her eye is slanted. Any critique is still very much welcome.

[Meteorskies]

Good improvements here. For the black and whote wip, indeed the hand looks wrong. I would add that there's a discrepancy between the upper and lower parts of the body, due to the perspective. If you hide the lower part and look at the upper one, and vice-versa, it's clear the two don't belong to the same body. Rework the perspective, with I think a view more "above" the character.

[Forrest_I]

>>>STREAMING<<<

[Forrest_I]

Thanks meteroskies, I'm going to try the same perspective, but just try and fix the legs Commission and more progress on the My FX challenge

[Forrest_I]

Might be calling it finished if no one else has any critique.

[Forrest_I]

I forgot to show this piece when I finished it awhile back, done in ebony pencils and prismacolors. Tomorrow I start my painting of Aquaman vs. Namor the Submariner

[Forrest_I]

Here's a study, my finished FX challenge submission, and a new WIP

[A4eon]

man, I enjoyed the last piece, wonderful job.