KITCHEN 4.1 we cook art here!

i drink and post · by **Mugshotpro** » 27 Oct 2010, 00:33

Wow this took a lot out of me. :08:

But, man i love Background practice and tellin' a story.
So this is Nice Guy Eddie's Safe-haven for criminals on the run. Basically a motel room complete with
Automatic gun assortment
various hand guns
first aid kit
wad of "walkin' around cash"
6 sets of keys to various cars out back
oh...and blow

Bordello is across the street...hence the red light from the window.

Paint a safe house for criminals, it should be a chill area where they could lay low, you can make it fancy or rugged, can be small or a mansion tooversee operations from
-Vats

boaaaaaa · by **bungy** » 27 Oct 2010, 05:24

very good mugshotpro ! i really like what i see ...

here is mine :

tipsy · by **Vatsel** » 27 Oct 2010, 11:36

I'm offering paintovers for the entrants, let me know if you're interested

Administrator · by **Randis ::** » 27 Oct 2010, 15:27

Looking good! :26:

boaaaaaa · by **bungy** » 27 Oct 2010, 16:45

thanks all
sure Vat , please make a paintover

i drink and post · by **Mugshotpro** » 27 Oct 2010, 17:06

Vatsel wrote:I'm offering paintovers for the entrants, let me know if you're interested

It would be interesting to see what you do with this one. go ahead

tipsy · by **Vatsel** » 27 Oct 2010, 19:52

awesome mates - give me a day or 2 though, theres so much other things to do haha

tipsy · by **Nakadai Shimada** » 27 Oct 2010, 22:31

I really like both of these. Bungy, yours looks rather imposing and classically well guarded with the gates and cam etc.
I think however I'm going to have to vote for Mugs on this one, although the guy looks a littttllllee flat (he looks a little too pressed to the wall) yours tells a great story, the mirror with the news reflected (very nice little story telling tool) the armoury looks hefty enough, and the equipment looks good. The way he's checking the window is a great pose.

Both did a great job on the overall idea, and very different ideas, Bungy's secure country pad, and Mugs' crim lock up.

Great stuff guys!

i drink and post · by **Mugshotpro** » 27 Oct 2010, 23:00

Thanks For the Crit Nakadai.
I have spent all evening going over online Basics tutorial on lighting and shape...I felt my piece is very much flat. time to get back to the basics all over again.

tipsy · by **Nakadai Shimada** » 27 Oct 2010, 23:35

Mugshotpro wrote:Thanks For the Crit Nakadai.
I have spent all evening going over online Basics tutorial on lighting and shape...I felt my piece is very much flat. time to get back to the basics all over again.

The lighting is superb, the lighting from the tv and the ambient secondary light from over the road looks great, and they work well together as a good cool/warm contrast, lighting looks great, though maybe upping the contrast of the shadows would add a little more dynamism?